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Living in the Mist II

First Poem
Written for Tuesday’s
dVersePoets Open Link Night
On 9/11Tenth Anniversary

Where she lays upon the day
where she lays upon the night
air and space meets
not to rest
but to live in the mist
where shadows become known
so it is shown
like steam out of a tea pot
forming and then pouring out
where shadows become known
so it is shown
both veiled and seen through
who knew
aware she lays upon the day
aware she lays upon the night
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8 thoughts on “Living in the Mist II”

  1. Wow, how super kind of you Jackie! THANK you so much for visiting and taking time to share your feedback. It means allot to me. I loved your comments — as you got what I was going for in imagery. Oh, and I was thrilled at seeing my writing describe as a “poem”! 🙂
    Thanks –joanie

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  2. Air and space meets…not to rest but to live in the mist…perfect words to me, for a tragic event..senseless deaths. Beautiful and haunting!poem!

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  3. Awe…awesome, Joan! Love the swing back to the repeating first lines…incredibly strong start makes for and even more powerful finish. I'm quite fond of doing the same. And that image…hello poetry!

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