Written this last Tuesday in August
Written With/For dVersePoets #OpenLinkNight
@dVersePoet
nothing prepares you for this day
scant feelings of rushed tears &
a sobbing soul
scant feelings of rushed tears &
a sobbing soul
somehow you keep holding
them at bay ~
pushed back &
buttoned hole
secrets of diagnosis
pinned down with yet
another pair of hands
without regrets
not for any part of the day
a closing and watchful eye
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Thank you!!
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Emily, thank you for reading and taking time to comment on my post for dversepoets. Also, “scant feelings of rushed tears” does markedly describe how I felt during this time! thanks
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Kelly, thank you for reading and commenting on my post. Thank you also for your kind words!
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Katy, thank you for visiting my blog! Life unfolds in many ways and and through tragedies faced we can grow in strength —
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Victoria, thank you so much for taking time to read and comment!
Thank you for all that your did as a hospice nurse. We used hospice for my mom, and then for my sister and for my brother too. Each of them got to be home during their final days! Meant so much to our family that we could do this for them. Thanks you again!
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Kathleen, my friend, thank you for reading and taking your time to comment! –so appreciate your words and friendship!
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Pat, thanks for the visiting my blog.
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Jackie, thanks so much for reading and visiting! I am humbled by your words — thank you! Pointing out “without regrets” is what I strive for too!
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Beautiful!!! Such restrained sadness!!!! Lovely.
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Sad and powerful.
I love “scant feelings of rushed tears”
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this has such quiet power… it has grace.
lovely.
and best to you.
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This holds true for so many of life's crisis…bravo!
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You compress a great deal in this, and it all is powerful and mature. There is no one that sooner or later will not have a day like this, yet every time it happens it is a fresh painful wound for the person involved.
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Joan, this is laced with both courage and emotion. To face a life-threatening diagosis, to travel that end-of-life journey alone or with a loved one can only be taken a day at a time. (I'm a hospice nurse–retired, that is–and have seen so many responses. Yours is touching. I wish you well.
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Such a poignant poem, my friend. It is a place we never want to be but good to face with no regrets. Sending smiles over the ridge to you tonight. K
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Yeah not much can be done on those days, just sit and watch many a time.
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O, Joanie, a small diamond gem that cuts deeply,knowingly. We can never prepare…and yet that “without regrets” resonates with the reader, profoundly. A great reminder, and some solace. So right on!
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Thanks Claudia for visiting my blog tonight!
I think you are right really can we ever be prepared?
Living life without regrets — important for me to try!
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Brian, thank you for reading and commenting as well.
Yes, very tough emotions as you know, so sorry for your loss.
Always difficult – may blessings surround you and your family each and every day!
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Thanks Louise for taking time to read and comment! Life sometimes is layered upon us — seemingly surrounding us with little else but immediate needs. However, one finds blessings within each moment that we do have. No guarantees —
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think even if we would prepare, we couldn't really… very sensitively penned.. and “without regrets” stands out for me as well
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ugh…hard emotions in this…nothing does prepare you for that day…you allude to why it was the day for you…but i think on some level we all have those days…mine for me was a long one with my MIL as she passed with no help available…
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Oh, a deep and moving small poem…”without regrets” stands out for me..
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