for just awhile
in a moment
between the doing and undoing of life
instantly
thinking of you
I calling across time
reaching near and far
for confirmation
that everything will be alright
wholly held
without knowing
when or even why?
Sad and beautiful.
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“thinking of you / . . . wholly held” : I imagine these lines working either way and both ways. Nice!
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Hope this one gets through–this was beautiful, esp the closing for me!
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This is sad, but beautiful.
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Hey Brian thank you for stopping by and for taking time to comment as well! I know the tension between doing what we are responsible for and then doing those things which we just choose to do — consequences of our decisions many times last a life time!
Thanks again, Joanie
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Thank you for visiting and taking time to comment, much appreciated Claudia!
Death and dying are hard themes but one that reminds us that life indeed goes on….
Thanks again, joanie
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Thank you for your kind words Laura! I find this to be true too — life has a way of turning pages even when we don't know when or why AND that's OK! We can make it through —
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beautiful, beautiful poem and image… and everything is alright, even when it isn't the alright we expected or wanted… this is what I keep learning again and again.
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will everything be alright? i dunno…will it be…yes….smiles….we live in the tension of that uncertainty…smiles…good to see you again ma'am…
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the being wholly held without knowing when or why is such a comforting image… sometimes when we're right in the middle of a storm it's not easy to believe that this day will come… but we know it will..
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