I await the dawn
Where the day’s fixes
Might be
I await the day
Where sun drowns out
What is
I await the night
Where love returns
What could be
Await
I await the dawn
Where the day’s fixes
Might be
I await the day
Where sun drowns out
What is
I await the night
Where love returns
What could be
I have posted the link to your site and this particular poem and hope this will be acceptable and positive. I love your poems – succinct, clear and fresh!
Your vignetteres are perfectly formed and quite sonorous. I love this one cenred around the sun and the photograph depicting the light of the sun. Excellent indeed!