Written for dVersePoets
Open Link Night for Week 72
This last Tuesday of November
11-27-2012
I lay across the dawn
with folded arms
tracing the light of day
Only hues of grays and blues
my Ozark mountain hills
whispering melodies of praise
Light floods my day
bringing landscapes up close
colors pour through an open bright blue summer sky
Moving forward
Walking on
making it
and
knowing
I will always love you
Spending my days
searching for moments
just like these
Where we can hold
time
in wide outreached arms and open palms
and our spirits rising
A time when all senses are vitally aware. Love holding time in an open palm. Beautiful.
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there's so much freedom and open-mindedness in this.. holding time in an open palm..love this..
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fantastic lines — a brightening poem
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Great lines full of beauty and love.
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Lovely, Joanie…and the last stanza is a killer!
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Nature and romance commune in this poem. Lovely.
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Love the last lines – can see the Ozarks woods thru the whole poem – beautiful! K
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This is just beautiful, filled with life and love
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finding i still love you…
holding time in an open palm…
love those lines…not grasping time but letting it be….
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