A Quickened Death
PUBLISHED wFOR OPENLINK NIGHT FOR
dVERSEPOETS THIS TUESDAY
NIGHT IN JUNE!
dVERSEPOETS THIS TUESDAY
NIGHT IN JUNE!
Most certainly ~ nothing!
Feelings drown out my
day
Thrown down & tossed
out
Ragged myths of farewell
bliss
How to step up and fight
Carry on
Didn’t you hear me?
Hours of the day
mount
Sullen moments
belie
My solemn
dread
the calm before a storm
I don’t know anything
Most certainly ~ nothing!
Uncertain future plays over
again
and
again
Too much to control with too much
waste
Fast forward as I’m in a
rush
Meaning escapes me ~ I place my
hope
in a quickened death
Carry on
Didn’t you hear me?
Thank you Claudia ~your words mean allot to me!
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wow…you touch a difficult topic here…but you're doing it very sensitively joan..
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Joe ~ thank you for such a high compliment! ~sorry it was your first read this morning! I am hopeful & prayerful too~ always go back to 'never give up' through life! There is always the chance of miracles! Thank you again for taking time to leave feedback as it is greatly appreciated! Have a good day today Joe!
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My first poem as I awake today is such a powerful one, and affecting. I can relate to such thoughts as asking for death to hurry up and get it over with because life has become too much to near. Written about them myself. But not like this.
Extremely moving, Joanie!
~ j
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