on the outside
up against my insides
into life —
charting a course
I am pressed
grain of sand
it’s crystal clear
I’m cut off from my own sight
mix nor colors
not a hue
PUBLISHED FOR DVERSE POETRY
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Jeff ~ so glad you enjoyed this piece!!
Thank you your kind words! ~ thanks for visiting & taking time to comment!!
Hey Beez ~ thank you so very much for your kind words & encouragement! You got it right!! This is exactly how I feel as I struggle with a new beginning ! Thanks Beez!! ~ so glad that my words did convey that feeling ~ as that was what I had tried to capture! 🙂
So glad you enjoyed thus poem ~ means allot to me! Thank you so much for your kind words !!
Ed ~ thanks for your comments! Yes the poem is something I have not written in-line before. Took me some time to place this type of theme in such a public forum! But glad I did! I have been dealing with many losses & chronic health problems which have forced many changes in my life that I wasn't really ready for ~ having to redefine my life! Many if your edits I too agree need to be changed ~ thanks!!
Wow!! ~ so glad you enjoyed thus piece!! ~ thrilled!! THANK YOU!
Joe ~ thanks! 🙂 Yes ~ swirling gyre is right! Good description ~ Very kind words in describing as 'insightful' ~ many times it is found in small moments like these!
Ed ~ thanks for your read & glad you enjoyed the music video ~ yep, everyday shadows have always inspired me & I have watched how the day's light continuously changes throughout! Thanks again!